Monday, January 9, 2012

How do i describe in some detail two vampires fighting?

okay its a strange question but i have this story that i update on Quizilla and i am doing a chapter where the main girl Terra is waiting outside a club and is attacked by a vampire. it changes points of veiw to Damon then back to Terra. now what i need to know is: i want to describe Damon and the vampire fighting; cuz i dont know how to write proper fighting scenes and such. the vampire that bites the girl doesnt die just badly hurt. but i dont want it to be gorey; so they are in an alley way and so far i've written that Damon throws the vampire(Xander) around and Xander fights back and they fight with their vamp speed. but i want a little more detail as its in first person from Terra's veiw. it'd would be sooooo much help if some1 could help! thnx

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